I would say to push that first painful pose more, where he grabs his chest. His facial expression is great, but maybe you can have him raise is shoulders more to really sell it.
OH! And, the first time his heart pops out and pops him into the air -- try making the heart pop out first, and then PULL him into the air... as if the heart is the force, and he's just secondary. Maybe that's what you were going for?
This is totally awesome, though!! Great energy, fun timing! I love the burp at the end. haha AWESOME stuff! :D
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This is looking really awesome!
I would say to push that first painful pose more, where he grabs his chest. His facial expression is great, but maybe you can have him raise is shoulders more to really sell it.
OH! And, the first time his heart pops out and pops him into the air -- try making the heart pop out first, and then PULL him into the air... as if the heart is the force, and he's just secondary. Maybe that's what you were going for?
This is totally awesome, though!! Great energy, fun timing! I love the burp at the end. haha AWESOME stuff! :D
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